Welcome back to the Lovecraft reread, in which two modern Mythos writers get girl cooties all over old Howard’s original stories.
Today we’re looking at “The Tree,” written in 1920 and first published in the October 1921 issue of The Tryout. You can read it here.
Spoilers ahead.
“On a verdant slope of Mount Maenalus, in Arcadia, there stands an olive grove about the ruins of a villa. Close by is a tomb, once beautiful with the sublimest sculptures, but now fallen into as great decay as the house. At one end of that tomb, its curious roots displacing the time-stained blocks of Pentelic marble, grows an unnaturally large olive tree of oddly repellent shape; so like to some grotesque man, or death-distorted body of a man, that the country folk fear to pass it at night when the moon shines faintly through the crooked boughs.”
Summary
On Mt. Maenalus, a favorite haunt of Pan, stand the ruins of an ancient villa and tomb. From the tomb grows an equally ancient olive tree of enormous size. Its eerily humaniform shape makes people fear passing it in the moonlight. An old beekeeper tells our narrator its true story.
Sculptors Kalos and Musides once lived and worked in the villa. Each was revered for his skill, and no artistic jealousy marred their brotherly love. Musides was the more worldly, reveling by night in nearby Tegea. Kalos preferred the dreamy solitude of a mountainside olive grove, where he was supposed to converse with dryads and fauns. Some also supposed he sculpted his figures after these spirits, for he had no living models.
The sculptors’ fame spread to Syracuse, and its Tyrant proposed that they compete against each other to fashion a statue of Tyche for the city. At first the two fell to work with joy and vigor, hiding their sculptures-in-progress from all but each other. Gradually men noticed that Musides grew grave and sour. Some months later they learned that Kalos was ill, and that Musides was his devoted nurse, even pushing aside slaves to minister to his friend himself. Still Kalos grew weaker. He spent much time alone in the olive grove. Though Musides promised him a marble tomb of great splendor, all Kalos demanded was that twigs from certain olive trees should be buried with him, near his head.
After Kalos died, the grieving Musides complied with his friend’s wishes. He also supplied the magnificent tomb before returning to work on the statue for Syracuse. Shunning former gaieties, he spent much time by the tomb, from which a young olive tree had sprung. The tree grew with prodigious speed, but its form, so like the distorted body of a dead man, at once fascinated and repelled Musides. Before long as many visitors came to see the tree as the artist’s sculptures. Musides welcomed their company, for the mountain wind sighing through grove and tomb-olive waxed uncannily articulate.
Three years after Kalos’s death, Musides finished his masterwork. Emissaries from Syracuse arrived on the eve of a great windstorm. They spent the night in Tegea, glad to be safe inside. The next morning they climbed to the villa, but found it collapsed under a huge bough dropped by the tomb-olive. No trace could they find of Musides or his statue of Tyche.
In Tegea, the people erected a temple commemorating the genius and brotherly piety of Musides. But the grove and the tomb-olive still reign over his former home, and the old beekeeper claims that the boughs whisper in the night wind, saying over and over, “I know, I know.”
What’s Cyclopean: The language in “Tree” isn’t Lovecraft’s usual, over the top more through ornate phrasing than energetic adjectivizing. “Lone and shaken mourned the humble courts and lower walls…” and narrated by Yoda just might be this piece.
The Degenerate Dutch: Musides and Kalos’s slaves putter around in the background throughout the story, never gaining names or descriptions or even numbers.
Mythos Making: Lovecraft will play around with Machen again, to considerably better effect, in “The Dunwich Horror.”
Libronomicon: No books, only sculptures.
Madness Takes Its Toll: No obvious madness today, sorry.
Anne’s Commentary
So, was this going to be another story of two guys living together long-term, and maybe they’re gay, but we’ll never know because Howard will only hint (wink, wink, nudge, nudge)? Actually he winks and nudges a lot more about the pair in “The Hound” and about Edward Derby in “The Thing on the Doorstep.” I guess the biggest reason to think Kalos and Musides are gay is because ancient Greece. Even then, they come across as similar in age, which would make their relationship less than the Grecian “ideal.” Also the stress on “brotherly friendship” and “brotherly love” and “brotherly piety.” Wait, are they really brothers? Nope, because elsewhere they’re referred to as friends. Just friends, however “beloved.” Like Bert and Ernie. I guess Musides would be Bert, Kalos Ernie. Yes, I would pay to see a movie of “The Tree” starring B & E, with Miss Piggy as the Tyrant of Syracuse.
Whatever may be the exact relationship between our heroes — this is a decent short-short, told by Magisterial Unnamed Narrator, reporting the tale of a simple Greek beekeeper. Perhaps the bees buzzed it in his ears, having imbibed the truth from the nectar of the tomb-olive. It’s the old tale of envy between brothers, whether literal or figurative. Cain and Abel are the primal types. Old Hamlet and Claudius. The Mozart and Salieri of Shaffer’s Amadeus, which is one of the most brilliant examples of the archetypal conflict and quite like “The Tree” in its basic storyline. “Kalos” has complex meaning in Greek, but it basically covers all the inner ideals of beauty, goodness, nobility and honor. A quick search of “Musides” brings up top references to “The Tree” itself. Did Lovecraft make it up, with “muse” as the base? Anyway, Kalos is the “brother” divinely favored, like Wolfgang Amadeus (Theophilus), literally “beloved of God.” It sounds like both friends are technically proficient, but it’s the poet-dreamer Kalos who breathes immortal beauty into his figures. Like Jervas Dudley, he hangs out in woods and communes with sylvan spirits. Like Erich Zann, he must thrill to uncanny music, here played on uncanny pan pipes. Like Pickman, he has unusual models, though Pickman’s are far from ethereal. Whereas Musides? He goes out partying in the city at night! As much as Lovecraft liked to scoff at the Puritans, he seems to have had as low a moral estimation of worldly revelers as they did.
The “crafty” Tyrant is evidently right that the two sculptors would undertake his commission in tandem, not hiding their work from each other, but he overestimates their brotherly love. How glorious must be Kalos’s figure of Tyche, goddess of the prosperity and fortune of cities, that it should sour Musides with envy, with rage that the divine spark kindled in his friend rather than in himself. From Lovecraft’s winks and nudges about Musides pushing slaves aside to feed and nurse sick Kalos, we must suppose he’s slowly poisoning his friend, as Shaffer’s Salieri poisons Mozart, and with the same deep ambivalence. Are all Musides’s tears crocodilian in nature? Would he waste good Tyche-sculpting time on Kalos’s tomb if he doesn’t at heart revere the greater artist?
Yeah, well, sorry’s not good enough. Chatting with dryads and fauns, Kalos has learned some serious magic — another form of immortality, through transmutation of his essence into a tree. Trees can be scary, all right, especially the gnarly old ones that invite anthropomorphizing. Lovecraft was fond of “peopling” his woods with overgrown and overfed and reaching and murmuring trees, like those in “The Lurking Fear,” “The Color Out of Space,” and “The Dunwich Horror.” Then there was that grasping “tree” we read about a couple weeks ago. While Musides is being simultaneously fascinated and repelled by the tomb-olive (the classic Lovecraft emotional duo!), he ought to notice that one branch hanging over his house and call a tree surgeon.
And Musides doesn’t just get squished. He vanishes without a trace, along with his Tyche. Kalos’s unfinished Tyche vanishes also. I like to think that Pan and his buddies turned Musides into moss to cool Kalos’s roots, while they spirited away the two Tyches to grace the dread lord’s subterranean hall.
The sad thing about transmutation into vegetable form is that trees aren’t too hot at sculpting. So all immortal Kalos can do after his revenge is to whisper “I know! I know!” to the night wind. That’s very poetic and all, but did anyone listen back in the day? No, they raised a monument to Musides and his brotherly piety. Makes you want to drop your leaves and bitter your fruit, that does.
Ruthanna’s Commentary
“Fata Viam Invenient” is from the Aeneid; it means “Fate will show the way” or “Fate will find a way.” Judging from the results of my Google search, it’s been taken on as a bit of a mantra by the “everything will be okay, trust the universe” crowd. Meditative plaques and tattoos abound. Virgil wasn’t nearly so trusting: in the original, it’s something Jupiter says while claiming to be neutral in the Trojan War.
Lovecraft doesn’t trust the universe, either, any farther than he can throw it.
This is an early story and not one of the better of those. The style isn’t recognizably Lovecraft’s at all, and shares with “The Doom that Came to Sarnath” an unfortunate premonition of Yoda—not quite as bad in this case, but the attempt at archaic language still feels forced, occasionally to the point of rolling eyes. The plot itself is a little too lightly sketched. One imagines that some unpleasant power is behind Kalos’s death-sculpted tree, but we aren’t given any reason to care which power or why it does this.
Best guesses for those answers are “Pan” and “because.” Machen’s Great God Pan is reported to be a strong inspiration—though not so directly as it is in “The Dunwich Horror.” I’ve never read Machen myself, and just went to look at the synopsis of the book, and can report with confidence that I will continue to not read Machen, and also, wow, the thing I said in the comments last week about how Lovecraft’s iffy treatment of sex is nothing compared to the iffy treatment by male writers who actually wrote about sex. That is a thing I feel even more strongly now.
Though there are hints of it in this story that are actually rather sweet. Kalos and Musides, whether they are engaged in eros or agape, are kind of adorable. Many of the deep male-male relationships in Lovecraft’s stories are bad for everyone involved: the couple in “The Hound” daring each other to greater depths of depravity, Harley Warren’s dismissive dominance over Randolph Carter, the eternal question of why anyone would hang out with Herbert West for six whole segments of a serial. But these two admire each other’s work without jealousy, supporting each other’s artistic growth—perhaps the perfect relationship as imagined by a solitary artist connected with distant soulmates only through correspondence. (Unless Anne’s right, of course. Anne, you are a more cynical reader than I. Which probably does mean you’re right, given the whole “lack of faith in the universe” thing.)
Well, perfect as long as they’re both alive. What the heck is Kalos up to here? Did he know what he was doing when he insisted on those olive sticks? Were they the price paid for whatever inspiration he got from the grove? Divine artistic critique? Punishment for some price not paid? Was the grove even more jealous of Musides than Musides was of the grove? (Or as Anne suggests, was Musides the jealous one, perhaps even to the point of murder, and Kalos merely poshumously vengeful?)
Pan. Because.
In addition to the connection with the later, and better, “Dunwich Horror,” I also see a link here with “Pickman’s Model.” As with Kalos, people model at how Pickman’s pictures seem drawn from life; Kalos’s ancient Greek admirers are more willing than staid Bostonians to assume this is the case. And yet, Pickman’s where we’ll see it confirmed, while Kalos’s relationship with the fauns and dryads remains obscure. Again given the Machen connection, one wonders if Kalos, like Pickman, didn’t already have a bit of his subjects within him.
Next week we continue reading stories that Dunwich Horror made us think of, this time E.F. Benson’s “Negotium Perambulans.” Just about the perfect title for any Lovecraftian story—there’s always something walking in the shadows.
Ruthanna Emrys’s non-Hugo-nominated neo-Lovecraftian novelette “The Litany of Earth” is available on Tor.com, along with the more recent but distinctly non-Lovecraftian “Seven Commentaries on an Imperfect Land” and “The Deepest Rift.” Her work has also appeared at Strange Horizons and Analog. She can frequently be found online on Twitter and Livejournal. She lives in a large, chaotic household—mostly mammalian—outside Washington DC.
Anne M. Pillsworth’s short story. “The Madonna of the Abattoir” appears on Tor.com, and her first novel, Summoned, is available from Tor Teen. The second in the Redemption’s Heir series, Fathomless, will be published in October 2015. She lives in Edgewood, a Victorian trolley car suburb of Providence, Rhode Island, uncomfortably near Joseph Curwen’s underground laboratory.
“The Tree” is another minor story, though the Greek setting is unusual.
Weird Tales: August 1938, with August Derleth’s “Three Gentlemen in Black” and two by Manly Wade Wellman, namely the third part of “The Black Drama” and “Dead Dog”.
Names: Joshi says that Musides is “son of the Muses” and that Musides and Kalos aren’t real Greek names. He also puts an approximate date on the story of 353-344 BC.
The language is very clearly influenced by Machen, though I also sensed a touch of non-Dreamlands Dunsany. What stood out to me most was the very unLovecraftian subtlety of the end. Yes, the implication is that Musides poisoned Kalos, but typical HPL would have had the tree whisper something much more accusatory.
I don’t know where Joshi bases his dates for the story. A quick check shows that this is the highly turbulent period between the ousting and restoration of Dionysios the Younger. I might have opted for his father Dionysios I, who is associated with another pair of great friends, Damon and Pythias. Dionysios II is the Tyrant of the Sword of Damocles, which would fit with the themes of Tyche, I suppose. I don’t know that any of that means anything, I’m just rambling here.
I can see where Machen might not be Ruthanna’s cup of tea. He was heavily into the Decadent movement, hung out with Aleister Crowley, and also supported MP Shiel through his scandal (though he might not have known all the details on that one). But he is a major influence on 20th century horror writers and some others like Borges. Maybe try to find something shortish just to get a taste? I’m not familiar enough with his stuff to make any suggestions. I do find him the least of Lovecraft’s big 4 (the others being Blackwood, Dunsany, and James).
@2: Joshi’s reasoning, from the annotations in The Dreams in the Witch-House:
Dionysius I established the tyranny in 406: it lasted until 344. The first known Tyche cult came about in 371. His final hint is that the tomb of Mausolus is mentioned: his widow Artemisia had this built after his death in 353.
For a Machen story, I might suggest “The White People” or “The Novel of the White Powder” (shorter than the title makes it sound).
Interesting. Though I wonder, given the ancient Greek setting, the love between the two brothers, and the idea of turning into a tree after death, perhaps it might have drawn some inspiration from the ancient Greek myth of Baucis and Philemon?
@3: Those are good clues, and I had forgotten the mention of the Mausoleum. The only problem is that Dionysios was exiled in 357 and wasn’t restored until 346. And then he surrendered the city to Timoleon the following year. Since Musides worked for another 3 years after Kalos died, I’d say Dionysios is out and it almost has to be after 345 BC. Or Lovecraft simply dragged a few random ancient references out of his encyclopedia and slapped them together.
@@.-@: That’s an interesting thought and just giving the story a quick scan before reading it, I came to a similar conclusion. Of course, he took it in a very different direction.
If you can’t stand misogynist overtones in The Great God Pan, you may try The White People. I don’t remember anything that problematic there, unless you accept Lovecraft’s interpretation of its (very confusing) ending. Anyway, for me it works just fine because I empathize with the “bad guy”, not proper English gentlemen who are against her. I really wish someone made movie adaptation showing the story from the POV of Helen.
Your language has such a strict word order. :P Funny, I’m reading Lovecraft’s amateur journalism writings now, including criticism, and he advices to newbie authors to stay away from excessive inversion. :D So much for practicing what you preach.
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I highly recommend Machen’s ‘The White People’, which, while it can be interpreted in a misogynist way, absolutely does not have to be. I can take or leave most Machen, but that one is unlike anything else I’ve ever read.
As for this story, it’s interesting to me mostly because it’s someone with an okay but not amazing classical education trying to write about ancient Greece. It’s not that there are obvious shibboleths, but the atmosphere reads to me as wrong, mostly for word choice reasons– things like the villa ‘on a verdant slope of Mount Maenalus’, where my reaction is ‘someone has never seen a good picture of a Greek mountain’. The really green bits are usually fairly flat, and the elevations are usually more like cliffs and very rocky. The point was probably to have the setting be Arcadia, with the allusion to ‘Et in Arcadia ego’ coming through subliminally.
DemetriosX @@@@@ 2: Happy to try Machen… just maybe not that one. I won’t say the plot summary includes *everything* that irritates me most in a story, because it doesn’t sound like it opens with the protagonist suffering from psychologically improbable amnesia. But it’s been a while since I could reliably appreciate a misogynistic cautionary tale about the power of women by reinterpreting it as revenge fantasy.
SchuylerH @@@@@ 1, Rush That Speaks @@@@@ 8: The whole thing had a bit of an “Alhazred” feel to me–not surprised to learn that names and settings are poorly researched. It felt inspired rather more by stories about Greece than by Greece itself.
Ruina @@@@@ 6: It probably does come from overfamiliarity with Latin, at that.
I first read this story years ago and my reaction was pretty much “meh.” I haven’t re-read it for years and my reaction now is still pretty much “meh.” While it’s certainly not *terrible,* nothing about it really stands out for me. (In contrast, I find “The Quest of Iranon,” while containing the same stilted language and pseudo-classical allusions, to be a lot more memorable.) While it’s interesting to see Lovecraft, like so many other writers go through phases where he internalized the voices of various authors he admired (Machen, Dunsany, Poe, etc.), I’ve never been a big fan of those particular stories. The only major exception is “The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath” and, while that still owes a lot to Dunsany, it contains a lot more of Lovecraft’s own voice than does a story like “The Tree.”
“Yes, I would pay to see a movie of “The Tree” starring B & E, with Miss Piggy as the Tyrant of Syracuse.”
Shut up and take my money! :P
Heck, I’d pay to see an ENTIRE series of Lovecraft movies starring the Sesame Street characters and the Muppets. Gonzo as Wilbur Whately? Kermit as Randolph Carter – or should that be Big Bird? Oscar the Grouch can be the Terrible Old Man, of course. ;)
(Obligatory tangent: I’ve not seen the premiere episode of the new “Muppets” show and I’m kind of avoiding it. I remember watching and loving the re-runs of the original show when I was a kid (Pigs…In…Space!). I know the variety show format wouldn’t play well in 2015 and reality shows are what’s popular now, but it’s stll kind of jarring and the commercials haven’t impressed me. Plus, Kermit and Miss Piggy breaking up = NOT COOL in my world.)
@10: There actually is an amateur puppet version of “Pickman’s Model”.
I don’t think Machen is an influence on this story. Lovecraft is supposed to have read him for the first time in 1923. “The Tree” was written in early 1920.
“I guess Musides would be Bert, Kalos Ernie.”
Noooooo, other way ’round! Ernie is the extrovert (like Musides) & Bert is the introvert (like Kalos) of Sesame Street’s bachelor roomies. Also, Ernie is the one who always torments Bert in the skits, similar to Musides poisoning Kalos in the story.